Moments
Sitting on the grass, under trees’ shadow, sunbeams through the
leaves, inundates me.
Thoughts
Distant memories, current sadness crowding
Flying
As a bird floating up in the air, soaring.
Celebrating
The miracle of life, the nature.
Singing
The sweet lovely melody
Reminding
That life, like happiness, is an instant.
1 comment:
First of all, I must congratulate you on such a beautiful use of the internet. It has been a pleasure reading your poetry and other articles.
Moving on, I randomly was searching on a topic about human intelligence and stumbled upon your comment in one of the blogs. Next when I visited your page, I realized how good your work is! This is truly impressive.
The way this poem has been presented, it seems it has been a good trip for you. A trip called Life, which in itself is the biggest trip! The apt use of punctuation and word arrangement has grasped my attention as well. The elixir-like truth of life, that it is a nothing but just another moment, has been put forward in a subtle manner. It is also noticeable how the feelings of an artist have been masked for a common man to comprehend. This is a literary work.
I just wanted to say it was nice to read it :)
Thank you.
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